I like the nostalgia critic the way he criticize is so funny but can you be my critic of my story if dungeons and dragons please comment it to tell if I did a good job or not. I only want to test my skill in writing. [link]
Love it! As a Dungeons and Dragons player and a Nostalgia Critic fan, I very much enjoyed his review, so much so that I had to go and get the movie and watch it. By God it was a ton of fun! Love it! Great work!